a fine day it was.
It shimmered and glittered,
but an obstacle lay in the path.
It looked back at me and smiled,
told me I was no good,
stop trying, it said, because you never could.
I have crossed so many
and yet this one looked different,
I had had my hopes dashed before,
the memories came back, persistant.
I knew I had to move on,
had to crush the memories,
till I knew they were truly gone.
And moved on, I did
with a grit I never thought existed,
but could I beat the obstacle?
I know not yet, because the ways of fate are twisted.
6 comments:
too good for a first attempt :)
would love to read more
nice poetry.. you write good..
well thanx..
excellent a T.S. eliot in the making
im flattered
a) gagansince1989
b) T.S "eliot"
LMAO
kill.me.
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